Harder lessons of life!
I was happy, when I was born
There were always ten people around me
To notice me laugh, cry and play around
The world of toys it was!
In my childhood days, I was excited
Was waiting to grow up
Liked to be treated like a grown up
Having a whole bunch of new friends
Then came the long awaited adolescence
These days still very fresh in my mind
All the teasing and major fun i had
The crushes and first love!
End of schooling, I was happy than ever
I became an adult, Lots of responsibilities
Total new world with new people
And I am struggling to face the world
Why were all the hype created, I wonder?!?
6 comments:
wow nivi!!! awesome babe...so simple yet so real!!! great for a first attempt. hope you continue to churn out more of these...seriously...good going da
ha ha.. i am excited.. don know for wat. but it feels good:).. thanks...
guess the comment of urs is really really valuable to me..:)
as its the first one for my first ever poem.:)
hey, pretty cool perception o stuff. awesome for a first attempt. any poetry i've ever attempted has turned out to be majorly abysmal :)
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g-man
this is was our poet shilpa told me...
"keep trying and it will click once for sure"... so u too keep trying..:)
hello dude! first of all sorry for the delay in reading.i really dint know there was such a good poetess in u. you brought out the complex facts of life really well. u shud try and write as much poetry as u can cause u r really good.
so get ur pen and ink on!!!
luv
swat:)
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